Saturday 20 March 2010

Sonnet of Invaluable Love

As I approach your elusive soft eyes,
I struggle to look deep within your heart,
Yet you detach yourself to live in lies,
Now illusive as you shred us apart,
As you walk away I gaze behind you,
Holding back the tears that I hold within,
Dreaming a moment I cannot undo,
To crave you I hope is but not a sin,
Our destiny has before been written,
But we choose to disregard our fortune,
I see its anguish leaving you beaten,
Though I know that your love will not shorten,

Your love for me is irrefutable,
My love for you is irreplaceable.
Posted by Suzan Aydin at 01:22

6 comments:

  1. whattupdarlin'20 March 2010 at 20:17

    this is awesome. :)
    "i crave you I hope is but not a sin" = wicked.

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  2. Suzan Aydin20 March 2010 at 20:21

    Thank you very much :)

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  3. mathurix20 March 2010 at 21:12

    mmm its beautiful =]

    'As you walk away I gaze behind you,
    Holding back the tears that I hold within,
    Dreaming a moment I cannot undo,
    To crave you I hope is but not a sin,'

    thoses lines are really good !

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  4. Suzan Aydin20 March 2010 at 21:14

    Thanks mathu... much appreciated :). What do you think of the others? :)

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  5. Unknown25 March 2010 at 08:40

    This is really good, Suzan!!! :) You're such a poet!!! :O xxxx

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  6. Suzan Aydin25 March 2010 at 08:42

    Haha awww thank you, that's a really big confidence boost :) I'm glad you liked it :D xxxx

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